Wednesday, April 15, 2015

First panel of my next book

I just now completed it and I'm posting here for a test.  I'm trying to get a raw and honest reaction to this so that I can better gauge how I should proceed with my next book.  What do you think of the style? The colours? The character's poses?  Everything?

Also, bonus points if you can guess what movie this is from (although my team of lawyers tell me I've never seen that movie before ;)  )

1 comment:

  1. Looks good dave,

    I would not use that road texture it is not in perspective with the scene and its off stylistically from the rest of the scene.

    The lady should also have the same shadow and highlight treatment as the rest of the scene.

    The sidewalk lines are not there in the back.

    Flash is great for Line work, however, I really recommend you look into Photoshop for colouring. Once you get used to it, PS is much easier and is far more versatile than Flash.